Pitch Feedback

Pitch Feedback

When making our pitch to the class we realised that some of the story line would not be suitable and we may not be able to make it to reality for practical reasons

During the making of the pitch we were involved in making a questionnaire. We wanted to see what plot will be suitable for a beginning of a British gangster movie. In our questionnaire people wanted to see Crimes such as robberies but as a group we decided that this was unpractical and would be difficult to film as it could potential injure the public so we decided to do a dodgy deal.

When we wrote our treatment we mentioned that we will kill a victim at the end of the scene but questions were raised as there would be no point in watching the rest of the movie as someone is killed and there is no sign of a plot. We need something that will draw the audience in the movie so we decided to change the script so questions will be bought forward which will be answered later on in the movie. This means that our audience will want to continue to watch.